It's All For The Best In This Best Of All Possible Worlds
short and sweet
i am a clonei am not aloneevery fibre of my fleshand boneis identical to ther others'everything i sayis in the same toneas my test-tube brothers'voice.there is no choicebetween usif you had ever seen usyou'd rejoicein your uniquenessand consider every weaknesssomething specialof your ownbeing a clonei have no flaws to identifyeven this doggerelthat pours from my penhas just been written byanother twentytelepathic menit says:o for the wingsof any birdother than a battery hen.
Oh dear, this awful doggerel and grammar. Symptomatic of our age I’m afraid. Look at this for example:Founder X X, pursued his life-long love of Interiors and Architecture after a career in the Publishing Industry [none of these words should be capitalised], bringing his skills in business and event management to his new career. Retraining at KLC School of Design, where he graduated with Honours [again, no caps please]. The skills formulised my experiences and taught me new ways of looking at Interiors. [again, no caps and why the switch from third to first person?]Based in SE London, X X offers a combination of strong dynamic design and creative skills, combined with strong business experience, ensuring your project is delivered on time and to budget. Our aim is to ensure peerless project co-ordination and exceeding your expectations in design, innovation and level of service.An interior design practice which understands the positive effects that a stimulating and carefully designed space has on it's [there should be no apostrophe here, it’s is an abbreviation of it is, after all you wouldn’t write hi’s] occupants wether [whether] residential or commercial. By being sensitive not only to the fabric of the building as well as it's [see earlier] interior dimensions and flow, we focus on the creation of sustainable and long term design solutions by working closely with our clients and discussing there needs in detail. Intelligently sourced materials and finishes play and important role in making this a reality. [this last sentence makes absolutely no sense]All at 182 Merevale
Whoops, missed one. 'There' in the penultimate sentence should be 'their'.
Well spotted Candide.Or should there be a comma?Well spotted, Candide.
There really is a shocking ignorance of grammar and punctuation even amongst supposedly educated people. Thank you poster for pointing that out. What an appallingly written piece that you quote from. Tut, tut.
eats, shoots and leaves – you missed another one.The ‘and’ in this sentence is redundant, rendering it nonsensical. "Our aim is to ensure peerless project co-ordination and exceeding your expectations in design, innovation and level of service."Replacing the ‘and’ with a semi-colon would work. Alternatively the whole sentence could be reconstructed as below.Our aims are to ensure peerless project co-ordination and to exceed your expectations in design, innovation and the level of service.
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